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Is the following sentences correct?

Post by anniekr » Tue Apr 16, 2019 5:18 am

It was the lot number 8 last time for the orders to Brazil from ABC company. What lot number is this order? Do we have to use the sequence number 9 or 1 in this your direct order?
(Please correct the sentences or recommend a better expression. Thanks in advance.)

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Re: Is the following sentences correct?

Post by Joe » Sat Apr 27, 2019 6:13 am

anniekr wrote:
Tue Apr 16, 2019 5:18 am
It was the lot number 8 last time for the orders to Brazil from ABC company.
Delete "the" in "the lot number 8".
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Re: Is the following sentences correct?

Post by Joe » Sat Apr 27, 2019 6:19 am

anniekr wrote:
Tue Apr 16, 2019 5:18 am
Do we have to use the sequence number 9 or 1 in this your direct order?
I don't understand this sentence.

"in this your direct order" is problematic
in this direct order :?:
in your direct order :?:
in this direct order from you :?:

Probably you can delete "the" from "the sequence number".

But until I understand the whole sentence I can't be sure.
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