Hello English expert,
I am targeting a job in USA but I am still not sure my resume is without mistake. Is any of you OK to have a look on it? It's quite brief with only few sentences. I would appreciate a lot...
Resume link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/jhu9rzonr1cku ... g.pdf?dl=0
Thanks for your help!!
Anthony
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Re: Resume 1 page review
Thermal and fluidic engineer
Are you sure this is correct?
thermal = adjective
fluidic = adjective
But to my ear "fluidics [noun] engineer" sounds right. Not sure how you'd convert thermal to noun.
Anyway, you're the expert in this field, but I suggest you just check. Something sounds wrong...
Are you sure this is correct?
thermal = adjective
fluidic = adjective
But to my ear "fluidics [noun] engineer" sounds right. Not sure how you'd convert thermal to noun.
Anyway, you're the expert in this field, but I suggest you just check. Something sounds wrong...
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Re: Resume 1 page review
specialized in two-phase loop systems
should be, I think:
specializing in two-phase loop systems
I would also drop the "a" in "a strong capacity" (as you have dropped other articles).
should be, I think:
specializing in two-phase loop systems
I would also drop the "a" in "a strong capacity" (as you have dropped other articles).
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Responsible of the thermohydraulic...
This is not English, and I'm not sure what you mean. There is some interference here from French. I think you mean:
EITHER
Responsible for the thermohydraulic...
OR
Manager of the thermohydraulic...
This is not English, and I'm not sure what you mean. There is some interference here from French. I think you mean:
EITHER
Responsible for the thermohydraulic...
OR
Manager of the thermohydraulic...
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Re: Resume 1 page review
Thx very much for your support Joe. I will correct and have a look to your advices
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I think I'm wrong about that first point.
Thermal and fluidic engineer seems to be ok, or at least people use fluidic AND fluidics
But the other points definitely need correcting.
Thermal and fluidic engineer seems to be ok, or at least people use fluidic AND fluidics
But the other points definitely need correcting.
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