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TAL
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Lines for a dating apps

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Hi,

Could you guys correct my phrasing? This is for a dating app.

Does this sound good:

"I like the simple and fun chemistry you can make with new people", please help me rephrase this sentence.

Also:

"I like a girl who can talk about traveling for hours, and isn't afraid to drink adventurously", I hope it doesn't sound weird.



Thanks.
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Both are ok
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Joe wrote: Thu Aug 22, 2019 12:57 pmBoth are ok
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TAL wrote: Thu Aug 22, 2019 12:51 pm Hi,

Could you guys correct my phrasing? This is for a dating app.

Does this sound good:

"I like the simple and fun chemistry you can make with new people", please help me rephrase this sentence. :ok:

Also:

"I like a girl who can talk about traveling for hours, and isn't afraid to drink adventurously", I hope it doesn't sound weird. :ok:



Thanks.
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