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Style of writing

Post by ancientone » Sun Apr 12, 2020 5:37 pm

Could anyone improve the style of this sentence please and also correct any grammatical mistakes if any-

Even after such a huge blunder, because of which the world had to face the consequences. China is still running some wet markets.

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Re: Style of writing

Post by Joe » Sun Apr 12, 2020 6:04 pm

ancientone wrote:
Sun Apr 12, 2020 5:37 pm
Could anyone improve the style of this sentence please and also correct any grammatical mistakes if any-

Even after such a huge blunder, because of which the world had to face the consequences. China is still running some wet markets.

Thanks
Change first full stop to comma.
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