Is this the right way to say it?

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oououoo
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Is this the right way to say it?

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"I hope we can all have a friendship like this one day."

I'm writing a script for a friendship video, does it sound awkward?

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Re: Is this the right way to say it?

Post by alexanderfinn »

It doesn't sound particularly awkward, but you could think of some alternatives:

I hope all of us can .........

or maybe use 'develop' instead of 'have'.

However, your sentence is not wrong.
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