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Pacifist
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another parapraph

Post by Pacifist »

Could you also give me some help with this paragraph:



"Later on, I realized that the miniature boat I had been chasing for a while was after all a remote control boat, and it belonged to the children of the American family installed on the beach on my side.
As I sat again on the sand, I felt so embarrassed, that I no longer was able to look at the right, and I could hear the children speaking and laughing."


Note: It's my intention to try to avoid the use of the verb form 'could' twice ("I was so embarrased that I could no longer..." and "I could hear them speaking and laughing...") Or do you think that's unavoidable?
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Re: another parapraph

Post by darcy »

'I was no longer able to look to the right' and 'I could no longer look to the right' are both fine.
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