I write the following composition for my students to recite. Any mistakes?
60% of the students like the contest. They think it can improve their speaking skills. It can also make them more outgoing and confident. What's more, they can make more friends.
But 40% of them don't like to take part in it. They are afraid to make mistakes. They worry about being laughed at. They have big pressure and they are not confident enough. Besides, they have so much homework that they have little time to practice for the contest.
In my opinion, the contest is good for us. We can learn more knowledge and we can make ourselves stronger.
I write the following composition for my students to recite. Any mistakes?
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Re: I write the following composition for my students to recite. Any mistakes?
They feel a lot of pressure and they are not confident enough.
Also, in the last line I would delete the word 'knowledge'.
Also, in the last line I would delete the word 'knowledge'.
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Re: I write the following composition for my students to recite. Any mistakes?
When you begin a sentence with a number, you must write it out in words: Sixty percent of the students. . . .
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Re: I write the following composition for my students to recite. Any mistakes?
"Sixty percent of the students like the contest. They think it can improve their speaking skills. It can also make them more outgoing and confident. What's more, they can make more friends.
But 40% of them don't like to take part in it. They are afraid to make mistakes. They worry about being laughed at. They have significant pressure, and they are not confident enough. Besides, they have so much homework that they have little time to practice for the contest.
In my opinion, the contest is good for us. We can learn more, and we can make ourselves stronger."
It might be better. When I knew English at the middle level, I always asked for help from other teachers. But then I found the source that reviewed all my papers. Everyone thinks that if you are a teacher - you know everything, but it's not. We also need help, and our students might be more clever than us.
But 40% of them don't like to take part in it. They are afraid to make mistakes. They worry about being laughed at. They have significant pressure, and they are not confident enough. Besides, they have so much homework that they have little time to practice for the contest.
In my opinion, the contest is good for us. We can learn more, and we can make ourselves stronger."
It might be better. When I knew English at the middle level, I always asked for help from other teachers. But then I found the source that reviewed all my papers. Everyone thinks that if you are a teacher - you know everything, but it's not. We also need help, and our students might be more clever than us.
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Re: I write the following composition for my students to recite. Any mistakes?
Also this variant might be good: "They feel a lot of pressure" instead of "They have big pressure"maidensedate wrote: ↑Mon Apr 18, 2022 9:33 am "Sixty percent of the students like the contest. They think it can improve their speaking skills. It can also make them more outgoing and confident. What's more, they can make more friends.
But 40% of them don't like to take part in it. They are afraid to make mistakes. They worry about being laughed at. They have significant pressure, and they are not confident enough. Besides, they have so much homework that they have little time to practice for the contest.
In my opinion, the contest is good for us. We can learn more, and we can make ourselves stronger."
It might be better. When I knew English at the middle level, I always asked for help from other teachers. But then I found the source https://essayreviewexpert.com/review/studymoose/ that reviewed all my papers. Everyone thinks that if you are a teacher - you know everything, but it's not. We also need help, and our students might be more clever than us.