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shaikat
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Please Suggest a better sentence

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Hi there,

I hope you all are doing well. I am writing a news item and there is a line as follows:

A paper, reports the findings of the research, titled “XXX” is published at a prestigious conference, "Conference Name" held on "Date" in "Location"

The sentence sounds incorrect. And also is the Conference name placed correctly? Can someone propose a better option?

Thanks in advance.
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Sorry, don't understand

To start with, is the paper or the research titled "XXX"?
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