Shouldn't a pronoun be placed before "ties" as in my version?
The original version:
The Vienna, Rotterdam and Munich philharmonic orchestras, in addition to the Verbier and Edinburgh Festivals, have all severed ties with Gergiev, however some have spoken out about perceived double standards of German politicians supporting his professional exile.
My version:
The Vienna, Rotterdam and Munich philharmonic orchestras, in addition to the Verbier and Edinburgh Festivals, have all severed [their] ties with Gergiev, however some have spoken out about perceived double standards of German politicians supporting his professional exile.
Zabanamooz wrote: ↑Thu Mar 03, 2022 4:12 pm
Hello,
Shouldn't a pronoun be placed before "ties" as in my version?
The original version:
The Vienna, Rotterdam and Munich philharmonic orchestras, in addition to the Verbier and Edinburgh Festivals, have all severed ties with Gergiev, however some have spoken out about perceived double standards of German politicians supporting his professional exile.
My version:
The Vienna, Rotterdam and Munich philharmonic orchestras, in addition to the Verbier and Edinburgh Festivals, have all severed [their] ties with Gergiev, however some have spoken out about perceived double standards of German politicians supporting his professional exile.