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Is this paragraph free from mistakes:


"Taken by drugs, he stopped concerning about making a living, and he didn’t even care about having a place to shelter.
He would just limit to drifting, with no destiny, indifferent about the future…"
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Re: paragraph

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--> "Taken by drugs, he stopped concerning himself with making a living, and he didn’t even care about having a place to shelter. He would just limit himself to drifting, with no destiny, indifferent to the future…"
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