Are these sentences clear being separate or should they be combined:
We are working with the customers on changes that they want to make. We will be working on getting subcontractor pricing while proposed changes are being finalized.
Thank you for all feedback!
Sentence Combining
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Re: Sentence Combining
Fine as written.