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Sentence Correction 8

Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 3:34 pm
by Hung Tao
Please correct my following sentence:
Beauty in appearance will fade away sooner or later but beauty in soul will remain forever.
Thanks in advance.

Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 6:01 am
by bwkcaj_ca
Looks OK to me.

Jack