A paragraph
Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2004 1:58 am
Dear teacher,
As relatives swarmed in and out of his family's busy household, Frankie discussed what it was like to watch his life as it unfolds on "Family Bonds," which he watched with a large audience at an HBO screening.
(Family Bonds is a reality TV show of HBO. Frankie is a child featured in the program.)
Q : "As relatives swarmed.....household" describes the scene of the screening. "it" in "as it unfolds.." also refers to the scene, doesn't it?
All the best, :)
As relatives swarmed in and out of his family's busy household, Frankie discussed what it was like to watch his life as it unfolds on "Family Bonds," which he watched with a large audience at an HBO screening.
(Family Bonds is a reality TV show of HBO. Frankie is a child featured in the program.)
Q : "As relatives swarmed.....household" describes the scene of the screening. "it" in "as it unfolds.." also refers to the scene, doesn't it?
All the best, :)