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my qestion
You have an English friend called Lee. You are both going to another friend’s birthday party next week.
Write an e-mail to Lee. In your e-mail, you should
· Say how you will get there
· Suggest you go together
· Ask him for advice about a present.
Write 35-45 on your answer sheet.
my writing
Dear Lee
We will go to friend’s birthday party next week by car. I would like to go with you to party and make interesting there with friend’s.
I advice with we going to him party and buy quitter for him .
Love,
Pearl
Correct that to me Please
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I'm afraid that correcting the errors here would entail complete rewriting! My advice to you would be to review thoroughly the essential structures of English before attempting to do this assignment.
Possible sentences to meet the assignment requirements, however, would be e.g.
1. We're going there by train.
2. Why don't we go together?
3. What kind of present would you suggest?
Good luck!
Possible sentences to meet the assignment requirements, however, would be e.g.
1. We're going there by train.
2. Why don't we go together?
3. What kind of present would you suggest?
Good luck!