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sentence structure and clarity

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suhann
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sentence structure and clarity

Post by suhann » Tue Oct 19, 2004 4:08 pm

Greetings,

Does the following caption have:-

1. sentence structure; and
2. clarity?

"I was watching a documentary featuring a town called Omnicon.

Omnicon is the coldest town on earth where the temperature falls below 0C, to -72C."

Your comments please.

Thank you!

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Post by Alan » Wed Oct 20, 2004 12:23 pm

Add a comma after 'earth', and it will be fine!

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