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Are there any mistakes?

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2013 4:28 pm
by palinkasocsi
Dear Forum Users,

I wonder if there are any mistakes in this:

That is, since butchery is a highly skilled profession, where considerable expertise and skill is involved (including knowledge of the anatomy of animals, and also knowledge of different cuts of meat) …

So, could anyone please revise this for grammar?

Thank you very much.

Pal

Re: Are there any mistakes?

Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 3:48 am
by Alan
--> skill and expertise ARE required...