Help wording this sentence

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Help wording this sentence

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Hello all.

I am currently making a resume and I'm having a debate with a friend about this sentence:

"Trained all new employees both the customer service aspect of the job and the baking aspect of the job"

Is there anything wrong/awkward about that?
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Re: Help wording this sentence

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--> Trained all new employees IN both the customer service aspect and the baking aspect of the job
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