Help with these sentences

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Help with these sentences

Post by PicoVena » Wed Jul 04, 2018 10:41 am

Hi everyone, this is my first post, I am sorry if I make some mistakes.
Can you help me with these sentences? Are them correct?

I am positive I can help with the services you demand. As you will see from my CV, I have relevant experience in SQL development and Administration. I am also skilled in Office solutions and their implementation with SQL sources.

Any suggestion will be welcome. thank you in advance.

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Re: Help with these sentences

Post by Alan » Mon Jul 09, 2018 7:51 am

Probably 'services you offer' rather than 'demand'.

Otherwise, it seems OK.