Does this sentence sound correct?

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Does this sentence sound correct?

Post by claudiarsz » Mon Jun 24, 2019 10:05 pm

Hi,
I'm writing an application for a reserch position and I wonder if the bold text is grammatically correct. It doesn't sound 100% correct to me, but I can't really tell why it's wrong:

"I want to be able to conduct my own research, and to have the possibility to master a field of my choice where I am good at and where I feel the most comfortable."

Thanks for the help.

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Re: Does this sentence sound correct?

Post by Alan » Thu Jun 27, 2019 7:35 am

--> I want to be able to conduct my own research, and to have the possibility of mastering a field of my choice, something that I am good at and where I feel comfortable."

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