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Post by Pacifist » Thu Jun 25, 2020 6:15 pm

Is this sentence correct:


"I discovered the website through other people who made mention of it."

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Re: question-4

Post by Alan » Fri Jun 26, 2020 4:33 am

'Make mention of' is a rather archaic expression: I would suggest instead 'who mentioned it' or possibly 'who made reference to it'.

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