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complex paragraph

Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2020 10:12 pm
by Pacifist
Is this paragraph correct:



"Laika had no easy life.
She lived adrift on the streets of Moscow, without the protection of a human being to whom all of her kind paid their loyalty and recognized them as their masters"

Re: complex paragraph

Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2020 3:26 am
by Alan
--> "She lived adrift on the streets of Moscow, without the protection of a human being to whom all of her kind gave their loyalty and whom they recognized as their master."