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simple paragraph

Post by Pacifist » Tue Nov 03, 2020 10:14 pm

Is this paragraph correct:


"Laika was a small dog about five kilos.
Whoever saw her, could even think that she was fragile, but in reality not by a long shot she was so."

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Re: simple paragraph

Post by Alan » Wed Nov 04, 2020 3:29 am

--> Laika was a small dog weighing about five kilos.
Anyone who saw her might even think that she was fragile, but in reality she was not so by a long shot."

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