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Post by Pacifist » Wed Nov 04, 2020 2:51 pm

Which of these sentences sound better:



a) "The Russian Space Agency was looking for a dog for a special mission, and to duely select the candidate, all dogs had to undergo some tests."

b) "The Russian Space Agency was looking for a dog for a special mission, and to duely select the candidate, all dogs had to be submitted to some tests."

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Re: option

Post by Alan » Thu Nov 05, 2020 6:43 am

Neither!

--> The Russian Space Agency was looking for a dog for a special mission, and in order for a candidate to be duly selected, all dogs had to undergo some tests.

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