paragraph

English grammar questions, answered by Alan

Moderator: Alan

Locked
Pacifist
Member
Posts: 36
Joined: Thu Jun 25, 2020 6:10 pm
Status: Learner of English

paragraph

Post by Pacifist » Tue Nov 10, 2020 1:13 am

Is this paragraph correct:


"Through sensors surgically implanted in her body, Laika was monotorized from Earth, and completed at least four laps around the Earth while still alive, her cardiac and breathing rate having stopped being detected from the fifth lap onwards."

User avatar
Alan
Teacher/Moderator
Teacher/Moderator
Posts: 13712
Joined: Mon Dec 29, 2003 7:56 pm
Status: Teacher of English

Re: paragraph

Post by Alan » Wed Nov 11, 2020 2:19 am

Through sensors surgically implanted in her body, Laika was monitored from Earth, and completed at least four orbits around the Earth while still alive, her cardiac and breathing rate having stopped being detected from the fifth orbit onwards."

Locked