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Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2020 1:13 am
by Pacifist
Is this paragraph correct:


"Through sensors surgically implanted in her body, Laika was monotorized from Earth, and completed at least four laps around the Earth while still alive, her cardiac and breathing rate having stopped being detected from the fifth lap onwards."

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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2020 2:19 am
by Alan
Through sensors surgically implanted in her body, Laika was monitored from Earth, and completed at least four orbits around the Earth while still alive, her cardiac and breathing rate having stopped being detected from the fifth orbit onwards."