Could anyone help me with this sentence please! How can it be improvised?
The court held that If there was no disclaimer in the beginning of the movie and there is a real person by that name which is shown in movie and people start associating that person with the fictitious character then the defendant will be liable.
Too much usr of "and"
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Re: Too much usr of "and"
--> The court held that If there IS no disclaimer AT the beginning of the movie and there is a real person by that name WHO is shown in THE movie, and people start associating that person with the fictitious character, then the defendant will be liable.