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paragraph

Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2021 7:28 pm
by Pacifist
Is this paragraph free from mistakes:


"Taken by drugs, he stopped concerning about making a living, and he didn’t even care about having a place to shelter.
He would just limit to drifting, with no destiny, indifferent about the future…"

Re: paragraph

Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2021 3:00 am
by Alan
--> "Taken by drugs, he stopped concerning himself with making a living, and he didn’t even care about having a place to shelter. He would just limit himself to drifting, with no destiny, indifferent to the future…"