Sentence Combining

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Sentence Combining

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Are these sentences clear being separate or should they be combined:

We are working with the customers on changes that they want to make. We will be working on getting subcontractor pricing while proposed changes are being finalized.

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Re: Sentence Combining

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Fine as written.
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