I have made up the sentences below.
(1) I don't want to borrow any more money, which will in effect increase my financial burden.
(2) I don't want to borrow any more money. Doing so will in effect increase my financial burden.
I am not sure which one is correct. Please help me. Thank you.
correct phrase [which will in effect increase] or [doing so will in effect increase]
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Re: correct phrase [which will in effect increase] or [doing so will in effect increase]
Either construction is possible, but "would' would be better than 'will'.