Amendment of text

[tamguatlay]

1. For using insulting words towards a public service worker, Koh and Chee could have been each jailed up to a year, or fined up to $5,000, or both.

2. For using insulting words towards a public service worker, Koh and Chee could each have been jailed up to a year, or fined up to $5,000, or both.

1. is the original version.

2. is my version. I have made a minor alteration. I wonder if it is an improved version.

Thanks!

[Alan]

Yes, better!