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English grammar questions, answered by Alan

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PRANJ
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Mr. Sanchez has requested emergency leave for two weeks, to settle urgent family matters at his hometown. He wanted to reach his home as early as possible. As discussed with his line manager, he has approved his leave request and requested us to proceed,
Since his annual leave is already due in September 2021, he would like to cash his annual leave and air passage.

Please advise me on whether the above sentences are grammatically correct?
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I suggest:

Mr. Sanchez has requested emergency leave for two weeks, to settle urgent family matters in his hometown. He wanted to reach his home as early as possible. Following discussions with his line manager, the line manager has approved his leave request and asked us to proceed. Since his annual leave is already due in September 2021, he would like to cash in his annual leave and air passage.
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