Rephrasing of text

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Rephrasing of text

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Chronometer watches and clocks are considered to be more accurate than the other mechanical watches and clocks, including even quartz watches and clocks.

Is "including even quartz watches and clocks" correct? Should it be "as well as quartz watches and clocks"?

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Re: Rephrasing of text

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Both grammatically possible, with (obviously) different meanings.
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