"Panelists will share their experience in creating a web business and strategies to increase online traffic" -> is this sentence incorrect because it sounds like "experience in" is also referring to "strategies" e.g. "share their experience in strategies" wouldn't make sense.
Would it be correct to say "Panelists will share their experience creating a web business and share strategies to increase online traffic"? Also, does there need to be an "in" after "experience?
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english grammar question sentence
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Re: english grammar question sentence
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