We haven't read your book, your (success
) story. Consequently we can't find a title and say "This is the perfect title !".
When I write a text ("How long is it ?" doesn't matter, according to me) I first write it, I get into the story... as deeply as I can... and only at the end of the story... I digest it... and I try to find a title. I cannot find a relevant title if I haven't lived my story. [For example : I can't live my story if I write it only for money.
So... as you can see... the path to the title of the story is my last path.
I will add some things - maybe they will help you - how I choose a title :
- differenciation : I intensively think about "Who is the lector (I want him/her to be) ?"
- effect/style : "Which effect do I want to provoc into the heart and the mind of the reader ?" [lector = reader, scusami]
- spontaneity : My title must be found/created spontanly... not by a too rational/methodic way/reasoning
And I test it... I read the title... I read the book again... does it fit ??? if no, find another title !
PS : We cannot read the book at your place.
Nous sommes libres. Wir sind frei. We are free. Somos libres. Siamo liberi.