I'm writing lyrics for a song and (being not a native English speaker) I have
sometimes linguistic "bugs'. In the case here, it's the following two expressions:
1. "To see the curve in your lips". The word "curve" doesn't sound to me,
but that's what I want to say - the nice shape, the curve, the bend, the beautiful
curved line of the lips of a nice woman. What word would be best in that case?
2. "To feel the thrill/flutter/vibration/vibe in your breath". Which word would
fit best to describe the vibrating feel of the breathing felt from very close?
Thanks for your feedback.