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...this question for the lyrics...

Postby BadDisciple » Sun Aug 05, 2012 8:21 pm

Hello everybody,

Not being a native English speaker and always having a doubt when it comes to fine expressions in writing, I have this question for the lyrics of a song I write: which of the two stands better? Here:
"Earth and sea mingling... memories and winds… "
or
"Land and sea mingling... memories and winds…"

Thanks for your feedback and finest vibes!

BD

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Re: ...this question for the lyrics...

Postby DavidAmes » Wed Apr 10, 2013 12:53 am

"Earth and sea" sounds more poetic.


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