I have a writing exercise:
Learning in group or learning individually, which do you prefer? Use your experience to support your idea.
I've finished my exercise, can you help me to correct the mistakes in my writing. Here is my writing:
Today, finding a good method to support your study is very important. I used to prefer learning individually but now, when I've heard and experienced the method of learing in group, I prefer that.
Firstly, learning in group can help you save money. Money is a hot problem now. As you know, we have a lot of books , references to buy for our study at school but we don't have much money. Because of that, it's much better if in a group, each one buys a book and shares with the others. You'll have a lot of materials with spending a small sum of money.
Secondly, learning in group can help everyone to complete their work well. You can use some of your friends ideas to support your work and so do they. Furthermore, the leader of the group will divide the work into smaller pieces, so what you have to do is much easier but the result is much better. Remember that many hands make light work.
Thirdly, learning in group can help you practice more. With your friends' help, you can practice what you've read in the books more often, which makes you remember it better. Especially, if you're learning a foreign language, it's necessary to practice speaking it with your friends.
Team learning is no longer new in the world. Everyone should use this method to improve their study at least once to know about its effectiveness. The decision is yours as well as your attempt to improve your study.
Please help me to correct that as soon as possible. I have to hand in on Saturday. Thanks in advance.