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please check and correct my sentences thanks

Postby koalachan » Wed Sep 21, 2011 6:57 pm

Hi,



Could anyone kindly check and correct my sentences below?



"I believe my mom has told you that I have posted the mail off by DHL. It will be arrived to you hopefully within three to four days. Would you be able to extend more time for us given that I am now in overseas? Thanks"



Many thanks in advance guys!

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Re: please check and correct my sentences thanks

Postby Josef » Thu Sep 22, 2011 5:52 am

I believe my mom has told you that I have posted the mail off by DHL. It should reach you within three to four days. Would you be able to allow us (me?) more time given that I am now overseas? Thanks


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