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Post by mrbluepix » Sun Jun 08, 2014 8:50 am

I had to write an introduction for a video and I need to have it checked.
Could you please help me.
Thanks a lot. {-;

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At the beginning of the twentieth century, the government decided to intensify research on artificial intelligence to improve interactions between humans and mobile applications.
Engineers created a supercomputer able to discuss with a volunteer user and learn human's life.
For economic reason, the government proposed to install the machine in a prison and asked a choosen inmate to participate to this project in exchange for sentence remission.
This project kept secret, was called "MLHL".
...but nobody could foresee that it will save the world.

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