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some one in the dark


Postby some one in the dark » Thu Dec 25, 2003 8:20 am

I spouse that I can do every thing that I want to do
but the life is not that easy so what shale i do
every time I want to be a flying bird
to find my dreams in here or in there
but how could a bird fly with out wings
how can souls fly with out sprits
how can I live with out you
iam aprisoner of love prisoner of you.....

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Re: how

Postby trannie_nguyen » Mon Dec 29, 2003 7:57 am

Oh this is good poetry, someone...? because i dont know how to call your name.
I know life isn't easy enough for you to live. But someone else would be better than the person you wrote in this. That is me :) oh i am kidding!!! We can live without finding the rest of our love. I think so...
To love and be loved is the greatest joy on earth.
Love decreases when it ceases to increase

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