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True Fire
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by True Fire » Thu Sep 23, 2004 12:43 am
I MIss You
I miss you much
Sit in front of the window
Look into the distance
Do you belive that
I can see you
I miss much, too
Take a seat by the dorr
I can hear the voice of your breathe
Do you believe it
I miss you very much
Everyday, I devoutly fly a pigeon
Who will tell you
How much I think of you
have you heard it
I miss you very much, too
From morning to night everyday
Crescent moon and full moon
They will show you my yearn for you
Have you seen it
I gently miss you
i softly miss you, too
A soft wind kisses the flowers
I have chosen you, you have chosen me
Since that choice we made
I would always always miss you very much
Noun by Noun, Verb by Verb: It is details that make writing interesting.
Dixie
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by Dixie » Thu Sep 23, 2004 11:03 am
Beautiful!
francine
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by francine » Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:24 pm
PoLoo wrote: I MIss You
I gently miss you
i softly miss you, too
A soft wind kisses the flowers
I have chosen you, you have chosen me
Since that choice we made
I would always always miss you very much
i love this part... wonderful.... :D
True Fire
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by True Fire » Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:34 pm
Thanks to dixie and francine
:D :) :D :)
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_Arale_
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by _Arale_ » Fri Sep 24, 2004 3:55 pm
Polloo, a nice poem really !
_Arale_
mandy
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by mandy » Fri Sep 24, 2004 7:06 pm
its so nice....so touching.....so unbelievable.....
"You..my love...
created a new path to lead my life easily.."
RedRose
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by RedRose » Fri Sep 24, 2004 11:54 pm
I can exactly understand what PoLoo means in the poem:-)
_Arale_
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by _Arale_ » Sat Sep 25, 2004 4:50 am
wow, Redrose, give us some tips .How can you get it exactly? I guess you are related in that poem ,aren't you ? :_))
_Arale_
RedRose
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by RedRose » Sat Sep 25, 2004 5:13 am
Arale, Poloo wrote the poem for a cute girl. In the other words, PoLoo loves a girl:-)
only when a person is in love, he/she can write such a romantic poem
_Arale_
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by _Arale_ » Sat Sep 25, 2004 6:11 am
Ahh, I see. Thanks much Redrose. well, you are full of experience!
_Arale_
RedRose
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by RedRose » Sat Sep 25, 2004 6:28 am
hehe!
_Arale_
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by _Arale_ » Sat Sep 25, 2004 6:34 am
Redrose , I can say that I am full of love experience but it is on theory only, not practical one. :( . I can give my friends best advices of love though I have not fell in love till now. Hehe...
_Arale_
RedRose
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by RedRose » Sat Sep 25, 2004 6:58 am
you fell into love? congratulations! with whom??
_Arale_
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by _Arale_ » Sat Sep 25, 2004 8:18 am
LOL Redrose ! I have not .Well I am so harsh in love !:_)
_Arale_
Dixie
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by Dixie » Sat Sep 25, 2004 3:12 pm
RedRose wrote: Arale, Poloo wrote the poem for a cute girl. In the other words, PoLoo loves a girl:-)
only when a person is in love, he/she can write such a romantic poem
Well it's normal since he's a married man :D