Love and Time

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Love and Time

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One day, there were some friends going to an island. They were Love, Happiness, Sadness, Wealth. On the way, there was an unknown man asking to join them and they accepted.
Unfortunately, a sudden storm came and frightened them. All people quickly left the island and got in their boat, Happiness, Sadness and then Wealth. Only Love couldn't leave because her boat had been flown up. She was so scared and anxious. She called her friends on their boat.

"Wealth, help me please!", she called Wealth.

"I am really sorry, I am so heavy to carry you", Wealth said.

"Happiness, help me please!"

"I am so sorry, dear. I am so Happy to carry you on my boat", Happiness said.

"Sadness, help me!"

"I am sorry. I am so sad to help you", Sadness answered.
None of them helped poor Love. At that time, the unknown man came and picked her to his boat though his boat was so small. He helped her reach the bank safely. She said after that,

"Thank you so much. May I know who are you?"

"I am Time", the man said and vanished.

Yes, Love will remain forever with Time! ;)

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Last edited by _Arale_ on Mon Apr 18, 2005 12:24 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Arale, as always, brilliant Image
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WOOOOWWWWW........

:shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:

that was fantastic......... :o
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arale..once again..i've already received an email about that...
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Thanks much Dixie and Francine!:)
Pinas, are you sure ? :wink:

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oh god....
that was...
i'm speechless....
its so wonderful..really...
"You..my love...
created a new path to lead my life easily.."
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Arale wrote:Thanks much Dixie and Francine!:)
Pinas, are you sure ? :wink:

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yeah..with the same title as well!!!
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Post by _Arale_ »

Ahh it is so wonderful because I made up it based on a Vietnam's children story.It is surely renewed in both words and plot.All words in the story were made up by myself.Hehe :wink:

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Post by mandy »

you are so welcome arale.....
keep posting great stories like this one.. :)
"You..my love...
created a new path to lead my life easily.."
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hmmmm....but I think love is transient, so is time. that is why Time would like to help Love :wink:
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Redrose wrote:
...but I think love is transient, so is time. that is why Time would like to help Love
Time proves how long and how much love is! :wink:

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Post by francine »

Arale wrote:
Redrose wrote:
...but I think love is transient, so is time. that is why Time would like to help Love
Time proves how long and how much love is! :wink:

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very well said... very well said.... very good.. very good...
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
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Time & Love prevailed... :D
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perfect
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Post by amanita »

oh it`s really intersting
thx :wink:
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I LIKE THE ARTICLE~~~

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THE ARTICLE GIVE US so much Thought,in fact ,the wealth ,happiness and sadness and so on is no important,it is important that we have love in our heart ,because it will give me fortunate living~~~
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love it too

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keep up the good work! I love the philosophy in the story...the moral is to wait and in time, love will be found...i always hope...thanks! :)
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Post by Admiral »

nice! nice! nice!

I really hope that what you are saying is true.
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boat of time carries love

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It is beautiful...a whole philosophy lies in it...sweet.
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Post by Admiral »

Yeah, you are such right!

There was a girl. She was the one for whom I wrote so many love poems, was the prettiest one I have seen, was the one I fell in love at the first sight. :mrgreen:

I have waited for her, because she had had a boyfriend. (I came a little late)
And I really believed all the time that the time I spend in is worth.

It is
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Post by Golfygirl »

A beautifully perfect ending. What a great finish. It was such a relief for Love--she needed time.
Thanks :)
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thanks very much, the last post means very much for me.
This is the most personal opinion I gave here on the board.
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Post by Arale »

Admiral wrote:nice! nice! nice!

I really hope that what you are saying is true.
I believe that it's true. Do you? If you, I and others believe love remains forever with time, it will be true. :wink:

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Post by amanita »

yea ,i agree with you .
love never die even after long time! :wink:
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Post by Admiral »

Yes, that's a problem which comes up if you think back whether there is still love after she slept with so many others.
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Post by ginny »

Admiral wrote:Yes, that's a problem which comes up if you think back whether there is still love after she slept with so many others.
That's not LOVE. So you don't need to rethink with such a girl.
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Post by Admiral »

But then, what about
amanita (nice name) wrote:yea ,i agree with you .
love never die even after long time!
?
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Admiral wrote:But then, what about
amanita (nice name) wrote:yea ,i agree with you .
love never die even after long time!
?
It doesn't mean you can love anyone, 'sleep' with anyone and then coming back to your first love. I don't regard it as LOVE.
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Post by Admiral »

Hey, wake up.
That's the real world, no matter if you regard or not.
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Time may bring loneliness,time may bring oblivion
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Post by ginny »

Codby wrote:Time may bring loneliness,time may bring oblivion
Yes, it's said that time can heal every wound but that's wrong. Time is our enemy. That love stays forever with time is good but it's so sad if love just stays forever in one heart.
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Post by sky888walker »

Many people are talking about love..
Many people are talking about eternity..
Many people are talking about everlasting love story..

but please tell me.. what a true love is ??
A simple answer using simple words from a simple and humble man
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