Be the light in my darkness

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cucsat
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Be the light in my darkness

Post by cucsat » Wed Jan 26, 2005 3:02 am

For My Love!

If I could tell you how much I love you,
If only you could see into my heart.
You would know I've always loved you,
You would know my heart is yours.
But maybe from where you are you can see,
Maybe from where you are, you know more than I.
If it's true please know this now,
We will be together again when I die.




Do you know ?

I loved you once, this I know.
I love you now, though I don't let it show.
Will I love you forever, this I don't know.
But I do know one thing,
this love never had the chance to grow.

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Post by Lalee » Thu Jan 27, 2005 4:53 am

I enjoyed reading your poem.
I was wondering if this poem was written for you ex-girlfriend. If that's so, then the lucky one would be so sad to let you go.
Nice poem! :)

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Post by cucsat » Sat Jan 29, 2005 4:33 am

thanks, ... I haven't.... :(
But I like poem, ;)

I just want to let you know that I'm sad now...
I'm thinking about you, honey, can you see my mind...
Be my heart, my soul, my life...
I love You so much, so much!
I can't do anything without you...
You know, I know, right?
..Now, I can not say anything else, but....

http://www.phuthuy.net/cartoon/yblm.swf <= click here, it's mine! :R:
I am Ferrum

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RedRose

Post by RedRose » Sat Jan 29, 2005 6:17 am

Very romantic.... you are so admirable, because you have already experienced so unforgettable love.

BTW, the cartoon is very wonderful. Did u make it?? unbelievable! that girl you love is so lucky!

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Post by cucsat » Sun Jan 30, 2005 4:16 am

I love you with all i am

I love you with all I am
And all I'll ever be.
You are my moon, my sun and stars,
My earth, my sky, my sea.

My love for you goes down and down
Beneath both life and death,
So deep it must remain when I
Have drawn my last faint breath.


yes, this cartoon is mine! I'm director of Computer Company and Flowers, ;)

(I'm 20 years old, don't think I'm 30 years, :( ) :mrgreen:

I like art, design, and more.... :mrgreen:
I am Ferrum

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