MISSING YOU,MY DEAR

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TAGORE
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MISSING YOU,MY DEAR

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EVERY DAY WE LEARND ABC'S TOGETHER ,THOUGH,
EVERY NITGHT WE WALL DOWN THE STREE TOGHTER,THOUGH,
MY DARING,I MISSING YOU SO MUCH,
BECAUSE I LOVE YOU.
EVERY TIME I WILL JUST THINKING ABOUT WHAT ARE YOU DOING,AND WHERE ARE YOU,NOW.
BECAUSE I LOVE YOU.
......
FOR HAVE JUST CALLED YOU,BUT NOBODY REPLY.
I AM ALWATS WILLING TO MAKE FRIENDS WITH YOU FROM ALL OVER THE WORD.
ebilly
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Post by ebilly »

nice!!!!!!!
is this poem or ... what???
any way .. i like it
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_Arale_

Post by _Arale_ »

tagore, your words sound unhappy. Share it if it makes you better. ;)
Best wishes!

_Arale_
jing jing
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COOL

Post by jing jing »

I THINK IT'S A SOOOO ROMANTIC LOVE POEM , IS IT RIGHT? OR THAT'S WHAT U HAVE SPENT AND YOUR MOOD NOW? ANYWAY i THINK IT'S COOL AND INTERESTING TO READ :lol: ;) :mrgreen:
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phumita
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Re: MISSING YOU,MY DEAR

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TAGORE wrote:EVERY DAY WE LEARND ABC'S TOGETHER ,THOUGH,
EVERY NITGHT WE WALL DOWN THE STREE TOGHTER,THOUGH,
MY DARING,I MISSING YOU SO MUCH,
BECAUSE I LOVE YOU.
EVERY TIME I WILL JUST THINKING ABOUT WHAT ARE YOU DOING,AND WHERE ARE YOU,NOW.
BECAUSE I LOVE YOU.
......
FOR HAVE JUST CALLED YOU,BUT NOBODY REPLY.
How I love this poem.
crazyangel
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Post by crazyangel »

you must be loving a gril right now? i guess
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RedRose

Post by RedRose »

crazyangel wrote:you must be loving a gril right now? i guess
absolutely!
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Lalee
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Post by Lalee »

Tagore,
I hope that someday, you have the chance to show your feelings to the girl you're in love with.
Good luck! :P
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