Poem with last "ay", :D

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Poem with last "ay", :D

Postby cucsat » Thu Jan 27, 2005 10:51 am

Hey, what did you Say?
You're strange this Day!
I want you to Stay
But you try to Say
" Sorry, i can't Stay"
This is a nice Bay
I'm a lovely Fay
& can sing for you a Lay...

But, are you a ...Gay?
only want a Way
go home to hit- the - Hay

Or are you a Jay
live in a small Cay

You say me a Nay???
You shall PAY for it. :x

To Vi: ai là người Việt thấy bài này thế nào? :mrgreen:
I am Ferrum

RedRose

Postby RedRose » Thu Jan 27, 2005 1:04 pm

haha! very funny!

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Postby Lalee » Thu Jan 27, 2005 3:23 pm

Good job! I liked your poem. Very funny, indeed! :lol:

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Poem with last "ay", :D

Postby Ali Yousef » Fri Jan 28, 2005 12:18 am

There's little that I can do or say,
for time must heal what he has done.
There's a little I can do,anyway,
for he's still your friend, but never once won. :!:
A language does have its limits,
but the verse
that can be created from it is
only as limited as are the abilities
of the one who writes.

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Postby cucsat » Sat Jan 29, 2005 4:16 am

Well, what should I say? :P
I am Ferrum

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Postby cucsat » Sat Jan 29, 2005 4:18 am

and next, :arrow:

Day after Day
You come and Say
" This's not a Play.
I want to Stay"
You think you May...
Overcome my Nay
To secure your V-Day??? ;)

hihi, Life is the greatest Adventure! :R:
I am Ferrum

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Postby Lalee » Sat Jan 29, 2005 6:24 am

Good one, cucsat! :lol:

RedRose

Postby RedRose » Sat Jan 29, 2005 3:19 pm

cucsat wrote:hihi, Life is the greatest Adventure! :R:


Yeah. whatever adventure you are taking, remember, don't get pregnant unexpectedly.


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