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do some writing about the picture :)

Post by greatJim » Sat Mar 05, 2005 1:12 am

----What is the girl thinking about?
----Why is she sitting there?

and pls write some words,maybe a story,maybe a poem.And i will choose some good pieces.CAn I ?

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Post by orange » Sat Mar 05, 2005 3:15 am

She is sitting to wait for the end of your chosing and she's think of the time you can post the best comment about her pic...! :lol: :mrgreen:

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Re: do some writing about the picture :)

Post by amoolah » Sat Mar 05, 2005 8:22 am

I found this poem and I though that it could fit with the picture....unfortunatly its not my words but I hope u will like it ;)

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Thinking of you
by Pastel Cowgirl



As I sit here alone,
My thoughts are only of you -
Remembering the tremendous love
That has been shared.
A touch that is so soft,
Yet has struck my soul to the core -
A look so tender and true,
It shakes the very life within.

As I sit here alone,
My thoughts are only of you -
I want to tell you
How much I miss you.
Silly, I know, it has only been moments.
The time that we are not together
Seems to pass so slowly.

As I sit here alone,
My thought are only of you -
I wait with great anticipation,
Longing to be once again in your arms
For the reassurance I see in your eyes,
To share again your warmth and laughter.

As I sit here alone,
My thoughts are only of you -
We know that love is for the here and now;
It isn't always forever.
Through painful lessons in life,
That is what we have learned.

As I sit here alone
My thoughts are only of you -
Maybe we can learn once again
That love can be forever.
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Post by greatJim » Mon Mar 07, 2005 8:13 am

really a moving writing,and just so suitable for the picture.

Shall I add it with..

AS I SAT HERE ALONE,
I DIDN'T REGRET,
FOR YOUR KINDNESS TO ME,
NEVER LEFT,
bUT I STILL HAD GRUDGE
fOR YOU ARE LATE AGAIN,MADE ME BE WITH THE FLOWER BESIDE

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Post by mr_Love » Mon Mar 07, 2005 9:21 am

I'm so tired of being here
Suppressed by all my childish fears
And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
'Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone

These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase


When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have
All of me

You used to captivate me
By your resonating light
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
Your face it haunts
My once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away
All the sanity in me

These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase



I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But though you're still with me
I've been alone all along


ofcourse not my words :mrgreen: [/b]

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Post by frengo » Mon Mar 07, 2005 1:26 pm

This beautyful girl has been abandoned by her future husband, just a few minutes before marrying him. She is sitting alone, when a young man passes there on his motorcycle. He looks at her, stops his bike and offers her a simple daisy. She throws away the bunch of flowers from his former and stupid intended, then smiles, takes the daisy and ride away with the young and romantic biker...

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Post by amoolah » Tue Mar 08, 2005 4:34 am

frengo wrote:This beautyful girl has been abandoned by her future husband, just a few minutes before marrying him. She is sitting alone, when a young man passes there on his motorcycle. He looks at her, stops his bike and offers her a simple daisy. She throws away the bunch of flowers from his former and stupid intended, then smiles, takes the daisy and ride away with the young and romantic biker...
I liked this one :mrgreen:
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Post by Lilian » Tue Mar 08, 2005 8:14 pm

this is last step that i have taken
for you
waiting outside with wild flowers
will you come?
its a beautiful day
so many days and night i have passed
just for this days
now your not here
still i am thinking and dreaming
of your sweet sound
for a lovely welcome
will you come?
this is the last step i have taken for you.

:D
English is my second language

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Post by greatJim » Wed Mar 09, 2005 2:30 am

another story

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Post by frengo » Wed Mar 09, 2005 5:52 pm

Uh, oh, look at there... what is that huge thresher coming from the right?

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Post by Elba » Thu Mar 10, 2005 12:48 am

Story for the first photo:

That beautifull gir is a top model after her show. She is thinking:

Thanks God, finally this stupid show has finished, I´m tired. I only want to get home, take a shawer and adrink and sleep. :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Story for the second photo.

The girl says: Furtunally I coud go out home. Here I could enjoy the cocain this morning bought. Sweet dreams Oyuki. :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

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Post by greatJim » Sat Mar 12, 2005 6:12 am

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Post by frengo » Sat Mar 12, 2005 11:25 am

GreatJim, this one should not be here... it's too much for me!

SLURP! :P

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Post by Dixie » Sat Mar 12, 2005 1:24 pm

frengo wrote:GreatJim, this one should not be here... it's too much for me!

SLURP! :P
Oh come on, could be your daughter! Image

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Post by frengo » Sat Mar 12, 2005 6:59 pm

If I had a daughter, I would definitely chase all her schoolmates... :P

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Post by Dixie » Sat Mar 12, 2005 7:27 pm

frengo wrote:If I had a daughter, I would definitely chase all her schoolmates... :P
Bad, bad, bad... Image

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Post by Unknownsu » Sat Mar 12, 2005 7:55 pm

frengo wrote:If I had a daughter, I would definitely chase all her schoolmates... :P
I beg to differ. There's nothing wrong with what Frengo said, Dix. You are not proposing that he contain himself, are you? It would be a sin for him to suppress his insatiable fervour. :mrgreen:

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Post by RedRose » Sat Mar 12, 2005 9:41 pm

Frengo is an over-hormoned guy :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

actually, I don't know whether the word over-hormoned exists in english. ;) however, I couldn't find a better word to convey what I mean. :mrgreen:

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Post by Unknownsu » Sat Mar 12, 2005 9:58 pm

Testosterone-induced is a more suitable phrase I think.

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Post by essie » Sat Mar 12, 2005 10:26 pm

The last picture:

The girl's thinking "I wish I had bought fabric print blanket and sheets, rather than painting it on" …..

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Post by RedRose » Sun Mar 13, 2005 2:06 am

essie wrote:The last picture:

The girl's thinking "I wish I had bought fabric print blanket and sheets, rather than painting it on" …..
NOOOOOOOOO!

actually, that girl was thinking:"who the hell painted on me when I was sleeping??? the ugly designs covers my sexy figure!! I wanna show my nude to all men, that why all men will drool to death!"

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Post by frengo » Sun Mar 13, 2005 11:42 am

Dixie wrote:
frengo wrote:If I had a daughter, I would definitely chase all her schoolmates... :P
Bad, bad, bad... Image
Why? Are 20 or more years old girls too young? I don't think so... ;)

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Post by greatJim » Mon Mar 14, 2005 2:57 am

frengo wrote:GreatJim, this one should not be here... it's too much for me!

SLURP! :P
frengo,As I know,Italy is famous of fashion .there is a festival in Milan.

If one day I went abroad,to Italy,(that's my dream).Can you give me some direction to go around in the city?

that's my job to make the discussion going on,and this is a picture with inspiration.

"when a woman is infatuated to the bed too much,she will be hued by the color of the sheet."

--that's what I got from the picture.
Bed is cozy.but to be alone can always make one changed .

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Post by frengo » Mon Mar 14, 2005 6:17 pm

greatJim wrote:
If one day I went abroad,to Italy,(that's my dream).Can you give me some direction to go around in the city?
Just let me know when you'll be planning your trip!

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Post by greatJim » Wed Mar 16, 2005 4:49 am

frengo wrote:
greatJim wrote:
If one day I went abroad,to Italy,(that's my dream).Can you give me some direction to go around in the city?
Just let me know when you'll be planning your trip!
i just attended an education exibition here,and maybe ,maybe ...

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Post by greatJim » Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:04 am

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if you look at the four little dark dots in the middle of the picture for half a minute and close your eyes ,then.you could see a famous man's face before your sight.

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Post by greatJim » Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:07 am

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just another magic picture.

move your head back and forward when you see the dot in the center. :mrgreen:

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Post by greatJim » Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:10 am

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i am sorry,but what 's the magic key of this mysterious picture? :lol: :lol: :lol:

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Post by Elba » Fri Mar 18, 2005 1:36 am

I´m sorry if I´m late. I have two days off Ok.

The third photo: Blankets Frengo, the bes fasion from Milano
The fourth and fifth I couldn´t see anything. Sorry Great Jimm.

Th last: Miau miau miau Miau miau miau, Miau miau miau

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