okay here?

LibertyFirst · Post by **LibertyFirst** » Sun Oct 03, 2004 6:26 am

Check the sentence below please. Is it okay?

Based on actual experience or perceptual knowledge would help you a lot, while without the experience or knowledge, you might feel not so easy to understand my introduction.

Arale · Post by **Arale** » Mon Oct 04, 2004 2:42 pm

Based on actual experience or perceptual knowledge would help you a lot, while without the experience or knowledge, you might feel not so easy to understand my introduction.

Here is mine:
Actual experience or perceptual knowledge would help you a lot. You might feel hard to understand my introduction without them.

_Arale_

LibertyFirst · Post by **LibertyFirst** » Sat Nov 13, 2004 7:07 am

Thanks.

I prefer Arale's rewriting version.