Sentence correction 2

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Hung Tao
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Sentence correction 2

Post by Hung Tao » Fri Sep 10, 2004 3:01 pm

Please correct my following sentence:
Beauty is a concept varying according to each person's opinions.
Thanks in advance.

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Re: Sentence correction 2

Post by Joe » Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:39 pm

Possible as is but might be more natural as:

Beauty is a concept that varies according to each person's opinions. :r:

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