Sentence Correction 8

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Hung Tao
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Sentence Correction 8

Post by Hung Tao » Fri Sep 10, 2004 3:34 pm

Please correct my following sentence:
Beauty in appearance will fade away sooner or later but beauty in soul will remain forever.
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Post by bwkcaj_ca » Sun Sep 12, 2004 6:01 am

Looks OK to me.

Jack

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