ENDLESS DAY

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ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Tue Jan 16, 2007 11:26 am

Can you – please – look at me merrily?
My winter always needs your spring
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
When you speak you seem to sing
You speak not in words but in rhyme
Everything in the world is worthless
I enjoy hearing you for long time
And my day, then would be endless

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Postby Vega » Tue Jan 16, 2007 11:36 am

A very good poem, :D Bravo Shakespeare !

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Postby babara » Thu Jan 18, 2007 2:37 pm

Hmm..agree...NICE!!

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Postby shokin » Thu Jan 18, 2007 10:21 pm

It is normal, it is Shakespear !

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Postby babara » Sat Jan 20, 2007 8:52 am

shokin wrote:It is normal, it is Shakespear !

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Hmm..You are right!! :D :lol:

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Postby Sunnypk » Sat Jan 20, 2007 12:55 pm

nice poem
It's too good

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Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 21, 2007 7:58 am

THANKS ALOT ALL OF YOU . SHOKIN ! DONT YOU THINK ONE IS IN NEED TO ENCOURAGEMENT . THANK YOU AGAIN

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Postby shokin » Wed Feb 21, 2007 3:27 pm

Yes, we all need encouragements ! even Shakespear and shokin !

We are waiting for your next poems, hanging tongue.

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 8:08 am

shokin my friend I miss you.It `s a long time .I want to hear about you .Good luck .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby denvinbo » Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:10 am

A sad poem......
Hey! I'm stuck! Get me out!

PIETY-The stories of parents and children

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Thu Feb 14, 2008 7:28 am

We must write everything inside our heart .Good luck .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:32 am

Hi . It`s not very bad .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:35 am

Hi . It`s not very sad , don`t you think ?
our life is like a night mare

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:19 am

Hi . sad ,inside our hearts, is great .
We must throw it out .Good luck.
our life is like a night mare

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby EliasJ » Fri Apr 11, 2008 12:59 pm

you have something special something different iam wonder your words are very special
i hope you a great future :wink:
Elias Jiryes

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:08 am

Thank u EliasJ
u r very kind
regards
our life is like a night mare

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:26 am

hi everone
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
c u soon
our life is like a night mare

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:32 pm

Hi .
sad ,inside our hearts, is great .
We must throw it out .
Good luck.
our life is like a night mare

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:12 am

hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby farah » Sun Mar 01, 2009 11:52 am

i think u r good poet.............
we have to live our life freely

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby asdfghjkl » Tue Mar 10, 2009 3:48 pm

It's a nice poem with a rich meaning.
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